Posted 23 February 2010 - 10:36 AM
Sherry - Your father told you I was looking for you, right?
Sammi - Maybe... maybe my reward for my work will come later, and much more shinier!
Strange Woman - He may not be the best company as you probably know
Edited by CrazeeFFan, 23 February 2010 - 10:36 AM.
Posted 26 February 2010 - 12:10 PM
I've been told that commas are used in english on rarer occasions than in russian so I might be wrong here, but it looks to me like the one I marked in red surely wouldn't harm.
Loren- Thank Ilmater! I will, of course, assist you in your own objectives...
Posted 26 February 2010 - 12:33 PM
Webster's Grammar Dictionary isn't even much help when it comes to them, so your best bet is to go with what sounds natural. I won't venture an opinion because grammar isn't my forte.
cmorgan: "None of us get old around here, just more proficient at doing more stuff with less braincells!"
Posted 26 February 2010 - 02:11 PM
If I'm still not sure though, I'll ask tcdale (writer of Crumbling Down in the FanFic forum). She'd know.
Posted 02 March 2010 - 11:54 PM
I was under impression that indefinite articles can't be used in conjunction with proper names, it kinda defies idea of indefiniteness
Unless, of course, it's intentional to empfasise how much PC don't know Nelson
- "Kelvin- Well, I lost the bet and, in the process, I also lost my ring."
IMO you should re-check commas here, either add red one or remove blue one.
Edited by Creepin, 03 March 2010 - 12:17 AM.
Posted 15 March 2010 - 05:33 AM
Or perhaps it's pretty common expression I'm just not familiar with.
Also, it looks like there's double blank between "he's" and "been".
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